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Lesson 37Presence Mastery
Segment Redesign Worksheet
Rewrite one segment so it clearly serves a viewer motive — promise, beat, proof, and exit.
Pick one existing segment. Redesign it around a motive, not around 'more energy.' If you cannot name the motive, the redesign is still vibes.
Before
Current segment name
What it vaguely tries to do
After (motive-led)
Motive served
Promise in one sentence
Key beat that delivers the promise
Proof viewers can feel (what changes for them)
Clean exit / bridge to next beat
Redesign checks
- Promise is understandable in under 5 seconds
- A silent viewer still gets value
- I am not baiting with fake urgency
- Ethics Gate passed